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This is gorgeous.
It was a slow burn in all the best ways. I really enjoyed your characterization of everyone. Your major characters were well developed, and your minor characters were interesting. I especially enjoyed your Michael.
I loved it.
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It was a slow burn in all the best ways. I really enjoyed your characterization of everyone. Your major characters were well developed, and your minor characters were interesting. I especially enjoyed your Michael.
I loved it.